Another Girl Lost

Mary Burton

Montlake Pub

Sept 17th, 2024

Ten years ago, fifteen-year-old Scarlett Crosby was held captive in a terrifying ordeal with a girl named Della. Scarlett escaped, their predator was killed, and Della simply vanished. A decade later, Scarlett is a successful artist. As hard as she tries to move on, the mysterious Della remains her inescapable obsession.

Della knew Scarlett’s secrets, understanding the desperate compromises Scarlett made to endure hell, and who, like Scarlett, embraced the darkness to survive, considering they were abused. The scenes of abuse are somewhat disturbing but not graphically described. Now Scarlett is confronted when a girl’s body is discovered, a link to her horrific past, and all her old traumas resurface. Nobody except Scarlett believes that Della ever existed, including Detective Kevin Dawson, who killed her captor and rescued her initially. But Scarlett still feels as if Della is around every corner.

Detective Dawson and his partner Margo Larson are both trying to pin on Scarlett the murder of the girl discovered.  They no longer see her as a victim but now a suspect.  Scarlett believes that it was Della who participated in the murder, but no one believes Della is alive. The detectives believe Della was made up to help Scarlett cope with her terrible situation or to give her an alibi for the murdered girl found.

What makes the plot very interesting is how the it goes back and forth between present and past. Readers get to know Scarlett better realizing she was broken while trapped in the basement, trying to build a normal life, and how she is dangerously obsessed with Della. Although broken, she is did not permanently break even with her psychological and physical abuse.

It is interesting how the main characters are all involved in subterfuge and deception. All the characters are complex. The plot is gripping, engaging, twisty, dark, with triggers and twists.

Elise Cooper: What is the idea for the story?

Mary Burton: This is stand-alone. I wanted to use gaslighting, how a woman believes she knows the truth but everyone around her is convinced she is wrong.  I thought that is a good jump off point to have the heroine remember something while everyone around her is trying to convince her that might not be true.   

EC:  You like the heroines to be complex?

MB: I wanted my heroines to have imperfections that push the boundaries and are dealing with their own demons and imperfections. Their intentions are very good people with their methods unconventional. They are also trying to be independent.

EC: How would you describe Della?

MB: She is connected to the heroine, Scarlett.  Scarlett thinks she comes back for her own reasons to want to control her. She was trapped with Scarlett, which bonded them in many ways. She discovered the body of another girl when trapped with Scarlett by the rapist. She embraced the darkness. While trapped with Scarlett she used hate and fear to her advantage.

EC:  How would you describe Scarlett?

MB:  She is frustrated that people think she is lying or confused about Della returning. She is clear-headed.  She has not let go of Della.  She is angry about Della, even obsessed with her, and cannot move on. This is why she keeps repainting Della’s picture. I think she is broken, trying to put herself back together, but the cracks are there. She is getting stronger, but still is fragile. Scarlett is searching for normalization.  She is trying to leave her past behind, but it is not letting her go.  Scarlett is trying to distance herself from the darkness, which was helped by the Judge.

EC:  How would you describe Margo?

MB:  She is broken and damaged, and she did some bad things in the name of justice.  She is desperate for love and attention. She is angry and readers can see that in how she has handled her former cases. She is looking for retribution and has a destructive pattern. She likes being on the edge, taking dangerous assignments, and has an edgier relationship with Detective Dawson.  Margo very much likes control and manipulates people. She presses the boundaries and sometimes breaks them. She wants to set Scarlett up. She is very persuasive and a bit of a sociopath. She knows how to use people’s emotions against them.

EC:  What role does Detective Dawson play?

MB:  He likes to give orders. He is determined and has tunnel vision.  He is not a perfect guy and is not a great detective. His loyalty to Margo is his Achilles heel. He is manipulated by Margo.

EC:  What about the rapist Reed?

MB: He is pure evil.  He found Della who became his facilitator and helper. He is a psychopath who will do physical harm.

EC:  Next book?

MB:  It will be another stand alone with a complicated heroine who is trying to piece together clues from a cold case.  No title yet.

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